Gary Orphey

 


Harley D. (the real king of the road)


© Gary Orphey


 


(Intro Spoken)


Harley D. was a trucker—the real king of the road


Of all the stories that I know—this one must be told


 


 (V 1)


A trucker’s life is just as hard—as the ribbon of concrete he rides


Through sleet and snow and desert heat—the white line is his bride


The knights of the road they call ‘em—they’re a tough and loyal breed


If you’re ever in trouble—they’re there in word and deed.


 


(V 2)


Harley pulled out of Memphis on cold winter night—doing the thing he loved the most


Driving his big black Kenworth—slicing through the night like a ghost


A car in front of him hit some ice—spun and went into a lake


He stopped his rig with a jack-knife on ice— his foot leaning hard on the brake


 


(Chorus)


There are thousands of men who drive those rigs and haul those heavy loads


But the one I knew as Harley D. was the real King of the Road.


 


(V 3)


Harley dove into that water—that was as cold as a dead mans grave


One by one he saved the people—I’ve never seen a man so brave


The little girl he saved was crying—she was missing her dog named Jake


Harley had lost a daughter of his own so he dove back into the lake


 


(Bridge)


He brought the dog to the surface—pushed to the edge of the shore


But Harley never made it—his heart couldn’t take anymore


 


(Outro)


I believe that out there somewhere—on a gold highway running fast and free


Is the man who saved my wife and child —His name was Harley D.


There are thousands of men who drive those rigs and haul those heavy loads


But the one I knew as Harley D. was the real King of the Road.


 


 


 


 


 


 


 


 


 


 


 


 


 

Gwyneth Rose Bradley
#1

What a beautiful compelling story of tribute and greatefulness. Loved the rhyming and imagery was so powerful Cowboy.


Awesome write. I think this is a killer song! I hope that you can bring it to life with a collaborator, it pracically sings itself!!


Bravo!

Gary Orphey
#2

Thanks Gwyneth! I love songs with stories in them. You know, beginning, middle and end.  I can't help myself. As songwriters we should remember as we write what Ralph Murphy said. "The listener has no imagination."  That gives us, the songwriters the task of fulfilling their expectations.

Ott Lukk
#3

I immediately thought of "Big John" when I read this. You did a great job on a universal theme. Ott

Gary Orphey
#4

Thank Ott, it's a rewrite, of a rewrite, of a rewrite of a....well, I know you know what I mean. LOL

Carl B
#5

Hey, Gary!


Wow! Great lyric! Really powerful stuff with good imagery.  Excellente!


Looking forward to hearing this one set to music. It's already singing to me.  : )


 


Carl

Dale Crockett
#6

Great story, Gary!  Chock full of great imagery - really put me there "where the action is."  


 


The only nitpick that I had - and it's just me - is the Bridge section. To me, it doesn't do what a bridge should do - it's more just a continuation of the verse where the ittle girl is crying for her dog.  


 


Maybe you could use what you have at the moment for your bridge as the first two lines to a fourth verse (I think you can get away with a fourth verse in a story song like this), and then just add two new lines about Harley D. "going onto his reward."   Just a suggestion. 


 


 


 

Gary Orphey
#7

Sounds good to me Dale...Not nitpicking at all..it is one of those things I do sometimes because it seems everyone is 'bridge;" crazy these days. Me too apparently. LOL


This is a story song that does not need a bridge and as you say this really does not do what a bridge is intended to do anyway. I will fix it.  Another verse won't kill it.


Yay, one last edit! I won't even tell you how many rewrites I have on this song. But, if that is what it takes to make it a winner. I'm in.


THANKS BIG TIME DALE!

Les Service
#8

Hi Gary


 


Very well written and a great heart felt story to boot.


 


I like Dales idea of changing the bridge to a verse and offer a scenario for you.


I did think of trying to put something about his truck and the family in the last line? 


May or may not be your cup of tea but I hope it sparks something for you.


 


 


He brought the dog to the surface—pushed to the edge of the shore


But Harley never made it—his heart couldn’t take anymore


He slipped beneath the water- with one last goodbye wave


To those grateful people on the shore- the family he just saved


 


Overall I think this is a great peice of writing with a good solid story and imagery and would love to hear a finished song.


 


Good luck


 


Les





Gary Orphey
#9

Yeah I would love to hear one too!  It takes a singer who can tell a story well. (not all singers can) I had a demo done that proved that. Think "Big Bad John" or the writer Tom T. Hall, the song El Paso by Marty Robbins.  It is so hard to get someone to step up to the plate as an unkown songwriter.  But then you and every writer on the Ramp probably know that.


Thanks for your interest and suggestions

Hugo Zhor
#10

Hi Gary,


 


again amazing lyric and song with a sad story.


 


Great one.


 


I think keep on rewriting was worth it :)


 


Hugo