Sounds good to me Dale...Not nitpicking at all..it is one of those things I do sometimes because it seems everyone is 'bridge;" crazy these days. Me too apparently. LOL
This is a story song that does not need a bridge and as you say this really does not do what a bridge is intended to do anyway. I will fix it. Another verse won't kill it.
Yay, one last edit! I won't even tell you how many rewrites I have on this song. But, if that is what it takes to make it a winner. I'm in.
THANKS BIG TIME DALE!
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