Shine On Me (New Version & Original)

Carl,

I had a thought that goes along with what John said. Instead of including "others" in the chorus, keep it singular, to the person to keep it personal..."I have never doubted..."

You could even change it up and focus on evolving (feel) as opposed to the authenticity (real):

When I don't know how to feel

My belief in you helps me to heal

But you mention feelings in the following verse, so I don't know.

A thought about the V3 line: Thinking about it, the line before it, "from the beginning to the end..." I wonder if there is an end? Just sayin', as you could put another word in there and get yourself a different rhyme for the next line that is bothersome!

Just a thought!

Kristi