Lonesome Dancehall

Sheila

don't want to be the one but I am.

this is really good but the chorus throws the melody out , in my oppinion it is hard to read and get the melody with the rest . obviously if you have music  it is more than likely  no adjustment needed

where are the pairs

so debonaire

moving in time to the band

now the music is gone

the people moved on

out of this lonesome dancehall

just a suggestion

john