Hi Carl,
I hope you've had a great day. Thank you for checking it out and for the great suggestion. "Excited" was a lot closer to what I was striving for there. Some times my mind doesn't work right when I am writing. I'll be searching and searching for the right phrase and the whole time it's right there under my nose. That's why I like coming into these songwriting forums. They help me catch myself when I'm stymied. Many thanks for helping me. Best wishes!
I hope you've had a great day. Thank you for checking it out and for the great suggestion. "Excited" was a lot closer to what I was striving for there. Some times my mind doesn't work right when I am writing. I'll be searching and searching for the right phrase and the whole time it's right there under my nose. That's why I like coming into these songwriting forums. They help me catch myself when I'm stymied. Many thanks for helping me. Best wishes!
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