Hey, Wes
Only thing that sticks out is......
VERSE TWO
Only thing that sticks out is......
VERSE TWO
I've went and said it now
I've put it all on the line
It's your turn to say it too
If it's the way you feel inside
You say that you can hardly breathe (Not sure this best illustrates her feelings of love,
unless the intention is to show that she's anxious and unsure but in love and or overwhelmed and ready to literally faint. I don't know.... Seems a little too extreme to me.
Baby, I know what you mean
I've been carryin' that same feelin'
Everywhere with me
****** Perhaps something like........... You say that you feel or get excited or You're excited
Just some thoughts - Nothing major : )
Carl
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