Larry
wow a whole lotta hog hoedown beer swilling going on here with some fantastic imagery.
As it would appear you have got this demoed (?) the song is therefore somewhat completed, it is difficult to do a critique on.
Therefore I would give you a suggestion how I may have tackled this as a writer
V1 What we got
Ch -Hillbilly Hoedown in the barn
V2 - girls and guys getting it on
Ch -Hillbilly Hoedown in the barn
Bridge - when the music stops playing and beers all been drunk, they'll remember THIS ONE
Ch -Hillbilly Hoedown in the barn
In terms of Lines per Verse and Chorus
V1- 8 (six at the moment but I would take two lines from the chorus and let em lead into the chorus so the chorus would be...
Chorus
We’re havin’ a hillbilly hoedown
Yall just come as you are
So bring your country manners
and put on your dancin’ boots
We’ll raise our mason jars high
and toast our redneck roots
V2 - Four Lines (two for boys and two for girls)
Bridge - two lines as above
But a great song and rocking noise
all the best
Arty
wow a whole lotta hog hoedown beer swilling going on here with some fantastic imagery.
As it would appear you have got this demoed (?) the song is therefore somewhat completed, it is difficult to do a critique on.
Therefore I would give you a suggestion how I may have tackled this as a writer
V1 What we got
Ch -Hillbilly Hoedown in the barn
V2 - girls and guys getting it on
Ch -Hillbilly Hoedown in the barn
Bridge - when the music stops playing and beers all been drunk, they'll remember THIS ONE
Ch -Hillbilly Hoedown in the barn
In terms of Lines per Verse and Chorus
V1- 8 (six at the moment but I would take two lines from the chorus and let em lead into the chorus so the chorus would be...
Chorus
We’re havin’ a hillbilly hoedown
Yall just come as you are
So bring your country manners
and put on your dancin’ boots
We’ll raise our mason jars high
and toast our redneck roots
V2 - Four Lines (two for boys and two for girls)
Bridge - two lines as above
But a great song and rocking noise
all the best
Arty
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