Gary
i am sure music will set it right but the tune kept shifting as i read this .
think line 4 in first v is a bit off
boogie 'till the sun comes up at a quarter past the five -- think this keeps the flow better . just my opinion
john
i am sure music will set it right but the tune kept shifting as i read this .
think line 4 in first v is a bit off
boogie 'till the sun comes up at a quarter past the five -- think this keeps the flow better . just my opinion
john
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