Tony this works well apart from V111 , where you break the rhyming structure . it could work as
took the love you're needing
then just left you bleeding
or something along that lines . as the other two lines are die and kills
just my 2 cents
john
took the love you're needing
then just left you bleeding
or something along that lines . as the other two lines are die and kills
just my 2 cents
john
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