Hi, Tony!
Good to see you back. I like this one. Only question I have is on a line in the chorus.
Whole thing is singable but I run into trouble when I reach, " is there an end to all of our crazy" in the chorus.
I can sing it but I think it could be smoother or at least that's how it comes across to me. I think the problem is often what translates one way for one person might translate or come out differently to another.
How about : " Is there an end to our fantasy" and then "Dreams of pretend" follow on the next line.
Just a thought.
Carl
Good to see you back. I like this one. Only question I have is on a line in the chorus.
Whole thing is singable but I run into trouble when I reach, " is there an end to all of our crazy" in the chorus.
I can sing it but I think it could be smoother or at least that's how it comes across to me. I think the problem is often what translates one way for one person might translate or come out differently to another.
How about : " Is there an end to our fantasy" and then "Dreams of pretend" follow on the next line.
Just a thought.
Carl
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