Thanks Carl & Ott. Sure appreciate you both taking a gander & giving me great input. The hooker concept never even came close to crossing my mind. The Giving of the business, is meant to mean working someone over. My ex used to "give me the business" all the time. Sometimes it was hard to sit down afterwards(ass chewing).... This is supposed to be better version of the old song where everyone warned
him she was bad news, and would break his heart cuz she was always unfaithful etc. (I can't remember the name) As far as showing him what she'd do, I meant all his friends etc, would show him all the other guys whose heart she'd broken & how messed up they were since.
.......At least that was where my head was at. Does that change either of you guys thoughts about what I got so far?.........Gus
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