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john morrison
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Larry


all great up to the bridge  just I think needs a little rewrite to make it rhyme better - not that things need to rhyme it is just after all the good lines it feels off  PO


maxed out it can't get no worse


stop the spell break the curse


free falling ,pull all the stops


make it better before it's worse


let's put this into reverse


     only my opinion


john