Larry
all great up to the bridge just I think needs a little rewrite to make it rhyme better - not that things need to rhyme it is just after all the good lines it feels off PO
maxed out it can't get no worse
stop the spell break the curse
free falling ,pull all the stops
make it better before it's worse
let's put this into reverse
only my opinion
john
    
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