Hi Larry,
I think the conciseness of the lyric adds to the mood of trying to make sense of the world idea you have going here and it's very effective.
It would be very interesting to hear how the emotions from a singer would play into it all. The subject matter is devastating...but I think many can relate to the search for understanding....so it's very universal as well.
Kristi
    
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