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ALAN TRICKETT
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Carl B said...


Hmm. Let's see what others think.  Set in stone  and or set like stone?  I think it could be stronger than this. 


I was set on fire by your glorious smile?  When I first saw stone, I thought Medusa. Lol.  Not sure it works.


Think on it.  I'll have to watch that program or channel you were watching to get ideas like this to write about. Fabulous! : )



Hey Carl I really like that !!!!


"I was set on fire by your glorious smile", it really fits well with the overall imagery of hot sun, heat & desert etc.   


The programme reminded me of the unfinished lyric i've had sitting around for a few years now. I originally wrote it while lying on a sunbed in Egypt    I had to delete the bit about continually swatting bloody flies & the immeasurable pain a guy feels after an hour on board a camel!!!