Alan,
The third line's 'mocha tan' reminded me of Ricky Martin's Livin' La Vida Loca and the following two lines from that song I've quoted .
" Her lips are devil red , and her skin's the color mocha." - Ricky Martin - Livin' La Vida Loca
Hmm I love sexy but I don't want to see you shift the aura or flavor into a new vibe here. Have to think about that one, but I like the sensual gait ending. The whole piece comes off as sensual and poetic. Very nice!
Could this be love, could this be fate works. It's common but it works.
In the last line, in my opinion (and opinion only ) I don't care for the ending with you make my heart race or you raise my heart rate.
The beginning part of the last line fits into the realm of what's going on here in the mysterious quality I got when reading this. " In this foreign land" Yes, very intriguing. Foreign land could either begin or end the line depending upon what you have said here.
Hope this helps! A terrific write no matter what changes if any come.
Carl