Thanks Carl & Kristi for your comments & suggestions.
I must admit I don't think the first verse is strong enough "as is". I need to work on it a bit more.
How about this?
A double take, a second look
You caught my eye, that was all it took
Oh your mocha tan, your sensual gait (Oh your mocha tan, your poise & grace??)
Could this be love, could this be fate
In this foreign land, you make my heart race (In a far off land you raise my heart rate??)
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