The Best Cure For Love Is Prevention Rewrite!!!!!

Hi Les, Welcome to songramp and writers room

Here is a quicktake. whie its true  your lines rhyme, I get no sense of rhythm

eg;

v 1 

You’ll never see a wedding ring on my finger

The married life is definitely not for me

To love someone in sickness and in health

Sounds like to much responsibility

I would have said it  something like this

You’ll never see a  ring upon my finger

Marriage is definitely not for me

loving  through all  life's dramas

That's too much  responsibility

my 2c worth  Jdub