It's none of my biscuit but you have something nice going her Jim I would definitely pull out the 'Why don't we stop hurting each other' hook and make a bigger deal out of it in the chorus. Maybe like this, if you like it it's yours. I would drop it at the end each verse and keep it a surprise because it's a good one. This may cause a verse rewrite but you can do that or be happy to help ya.(no co-write BS) Just holler.
Why don't we stop.(pause)
Hurting each other
We both know
That we're in love
Why don't we stop.(pause)
Hurting each other
Good times together
Is what loves made of
(Just a guy trying to help)
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