Eddie you more than likely have music for this ,then it will all work well PO think the first part of the chorus sounded /read a bit clunky .the second part a lot better
oh Lord help,me get through this long winter night
it's dark and I'm lonley let me see the light - or maybe a light
this feels a bit religious not ment to just how it came out
john
Thanks for the comments. I just wrote this today - lots of room for changes. Thanks for the suggestions!
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