john morrison said...
Hugo
i there is music to this it probably works fine , two pre choruses don't really think it works as you have no chorus after the first two just another verse . I know you will know what it is about but leaves th e reader a bit confused read it a couple of times and still none the wiser PO
john
Hi John,
thank you for your comment.
About 2 prechorus.In this lyric I wanted to show a rising tension of melancholy in me so it's better with verses and prechorus and as a conclusion the chorus at last.
I know you are quite confused and I understand. I like to write lyrics more general than exactly write about because in general everyone could relate to it and imagine his/her problems in it.
Cheers
Hugo
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