Hi Hugo and welcome to the Lyric Lounge and SONG RAMP.
Deep emotions here and they are understood. I doubt that anyone reading them has not been there. That makes them a universal subject and a great idea for a song. But there is deeper story behind these emotions which are basically the same sadness and melancholy in both verses and chorus repeated, said in different ways.
I would love to be brought into your story of suffering with who, what, when, where and how (or a combination of these) to tell the story. Tenderly of course. You know the story Hugo, tell us please. Beginning, middle and end, we would love to go there with you.
A meaningful chorus could carry the emotions of which you speak. The verses telling us how it was. What it became and how it ended. You have the words, they are in you. Me? I'm just a guy trying to help.
Thanks,
Gary (Forum Moderator)