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Thread: Swan Song
Larry Formolo
#2

Hmm. Did I try to rhyme "then to savannah" with "and use our hands more"? I don't know. It looks wrong, but it sings okay.


I guess I'll find out if it works when I add music.


 


The first verse was one of the last ones written. I ran out of easy rhymes? Was just going by sound? I don't know.