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Gwyneth Rose Bradley
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Hi Gwyneth,


 


I like the changes you made in the lyric and think this is well-written. It's quite powerful really. The chorus is concise and rolls off the tongue. I like how we don't know the relationship between them right off the bat. It's a nice twist because my mind went to the typical guy/girl relationship. This covers a lot of ground and will make an emotional song. Well done!



 


Hi Kristi, thanks so much for that wonderful comment. Happy to hear you liked it.