Carl B

I thought to give Dale's collaboration idea another try with a stipulation attached to it.  Let's try to create a lyric  using Verse, Chorus, Verse, Chorus, Bridge, Chorus structure.


Each person creates a single line. If you notice a particular rhyming pattern, try and maintain it. Let's say each verse will be 8 lines? Chorus the same. Once the 8th line is complete on the verse, the next person starts the chorus. Once the chorus is complete we only have a verse and a bridge to go, but whoever starts up the second verse should copy n past the chorus already written when adding a new verse line to the lyric. The same would follow suit after the bridge. Labeling each section might help to alleviate any confusion.


Bridge. Hmmm   Four lines? No more.     Shall we play a game.  Come on. Try it out.


Each time you add a line, cut n paste the line above yours to continue the lyric.


 


I'm going to start things up here but if you want to add a thought, comment or suggestion  please feel free to chime in.


 


Verse One


 Walked out the door

Gerald Wiebe
#1

 Writing songs is the most fun you can have with your clothes on....imagine doing it naked


 


Verse One


 


 Walked out the door


Just in time to see


 


 

Carl B
#2

Verse One


Walked out the door


Just in time to see


An eight foot Sasquatch                                                     


 


 


 


                                                                                                                                           

Gerald Wiebe
#3

So its that kind of song...lol


 


Verse One


 


Walked out the door 


Just in time to see 


An eight foot Sasquatch 


Steal my SUV                                                      

Carl B
#4

Walked out the door 


Just in time to see 


An eight foot Sasquatch 


Steal my SUV  


My jaw was hangin' open            

Gerald Wiebe
#5

Walked out the door  


Just in time to see  


An eight foot Sasquatch  


Steal my SUV  


 


My jaw was hangin' open


Tongue 'bout hit the floor

Carl B
#6

(Verse One)


Walked out the door  


Just in time to see  


An eight foot Sasquatch  


Steal my SUV  


My jaw was hangin' open


Tongue 'bout hit the floor


Next thing ya' know

Gerald Wiebe
#7

(Verse One)


Walked out the door


Just in time to see


An eight foot Sasquatch


Steal my SUV


My jaw was hangin' open


Tongue 'bout hit the floor


Next thing ya' know


There were two more 

Carl B
#8

(Verse One)


Walked out the door

Just in time to see


An eight foot Sasquatch

Steal my SUV


My jaw was hangin' open

Tongue 'bout hit the floor


Next thing ya' know

There were two more 


 


(Chorus)


Some say they're gorillas


Gerald Wiebe
#9

(Verse One)



Walked out the door


Just in time to see
An eight foot Sasquatch


Steal my SUV
My jaw was hangin' open


Tongue 'bout hit the floor
Next thing ya' know


There were two more


 


(Chorus)


Some say they're gorillas


I don't think that's true

Gerald Wiebe
#10

So far, its looking like a good one to add to my set list....lol

Carl B
#11

(Verse One)


Walked out the door

Just in time to see
An eight foot Sasquatch


Steal my SUV

My jaw was hangin' open


Tongue 'bout hit the floor

Next thing ya' know


There were two more

 


(Chorus)


Some say they're gorillas


I don't think that's true



Cuz one's behind the wheel
Gerald Wiebe
#12

(Verse One)



Walked out the door


Just in time to see
An eight foot Sasquatch
Steal my SUV


My jaw was hangin' open
Tongue 'bout hit the floor


Next thing ya' know
There were two more


(Chorus)


Some say they're gorillas


I don't think that's true


Cuz one's behind the wheel

Chasing the other two


Carl B
#13

   Lol  That's a good one.

Carl B
#14

(Verse One)


Walked out the door

Just in time to see
An eight foot Sasquatch
Steal my SUV


My jaw was hangin' open

Tongue 'bout hit the floor


Next thing ya' know

There were two more




(Chorus)


Some say they're gorillas

I don't think that's true


Cuz one's behind the wheel

Chasing the other two

Wonder if I should call the cops





Chris Erhardt
#15

(Verse One)



Walked out the door


Just in time to see
An eight foot Sasquatch
Steal my SUV



My jaw was hangin' open


Tongue 'bout hit the floor



Next thing ya' know


There were two more






(Chorus)



Some say they're gorillas


I don't think that's true



Cuz one's behind the wheel


Chasing the other two

 


Wonder if I should call the cops

Or join in on the fun
Chris Erhardt
#16

let's see where this is going lol...

Gerald Wiebe
#17

(Verse One)



Walked out the door


Just in time to see
An eight foot Sasquatch
Steal my SUV
My jaw was hangin' open


Tongue 'bout hit the floor
Next thing ya' know


There were two more


(Chorus)



Some say they're gorillas


I don't think that's true
Cuz one's behind the wheel


Chasing the other two

Wonder if I should call the cops

Or join in on the fun

Probably get thrown in jail



 

Gerald Wiebe
#18


let's see where this is going lol...



 


Nowhere...in a quick hurry...lol


But I've never been there so I'm sticking around...

Gerald Wiebe
#19

We're going to need a mascot for this song.....or 3....


 


Gwyneth Rose Bradley
#20

(Chorus)


 



Some say they're gorillas


 


I don't think that's true
Cuz one's behind the wheel


 


Chasing the other two

 


Wonder if I should call the cops

 


Or join in on the fun

 


Probably get thrown in jail

 

Blame me, say I'm the one
Carl B
#21

(Verse One)


Walked out the door


Just in time to see
An eight foot Sasquatch
Steal my SUV
My jaw was hangin' open


Tongue 'bout hit the floor
Next thing ya' know


There were two more


(Chorus)


Some say they're gorillas


I don't think that's true
Cuz one's behind the wheel


Chasing the other two


Wonder if I should call the cops


Or join in on the fun


Probably get thrown in jail


Blame me, say I'm the one


 


(Verse Two)


Started runnin'




 



Gerald Wiebe
#22

(Verse One)


 


Walked out the door


Just in time to see
An eight foot Sasquatch
Steal my SUV
My jaw was hangin' open


Tongue 'bout hit the floor
Next thing ya' know


There were two more


(Chorus)


Some say they're gorillas


I don't think that's true
Cuz one's behind the wheel


Chasing the other two


Wonder if I should call the cops


Or join in on the fun


Probably get thrown in jail


Blame me, say I'm the one


 


(Verse Two)


 


Started runnin'


I just had to see


 

Gwyneth Rose Bradley
#23

Started runnin'


 


I just had to see


If I could catch a glimpse


 

Carl B
#24

(Verse One)


 


 Walked out the door


Just in time to see


An eight foot Sasquatch


Steal my SUV
My jaw was hangin' open


 Tongue 'bout hit the floor


Next thing ya' know


There were two more


 


(Chorus)


Some say they're gorillas


I don't think that's true


Cuz one's behind the wheel


Chasing the other two


Wonder if I should call the cops


Or join in on the fun


Probably get thrown in jail


 Blame me, say I'm the one


 


 (Verse Two)


 


Started runnin'


I just had to see


If I could catch a glimpse


To set my mind free