Ott. I listened to your song about the rabit hole. Really interesting song with some cool vibes and electronic sounds. I don't listen to that kind of music, so I didn't know how to rate it and didn't leave any comments. (NOTE: Somebody told me, when you leave a comment for a song but don't rate it, it defaults to 5 stars?)
I guess for that genre' the metaphorical rabit hole being a party zone is cool? BUT, here's a thought for you. Write some lyrics about a real place with real kids having a party. Call it "Barn Dance", where it is a real barn in a farmers pasture. Then, throw in a bon fire, hot dogs, hamburgers, coolers of beer, girls and guys dancing on the hay covered red clay. Please do not use cutoff jeans, short shorts, tight genes, or "GURL" though! You can use something like, "Half buttoned Levi shirt tied off above the waist". You might even get away with a belly button ring. Oh, and you don't need any pickup truck tail gates either. Then, marry those lyrics to the cool groove and sounds in your song, and I'll bet you'd have the next big country hit!
phil g.