John W,
You caught me making a typo and displaying my poor spelling.
I'm sure you were just joking with where your mind wanted to take you.
The idea was her being shy and innocent. Easy to spot with some people; just like it's easy to assume the opposite opinion of a lady having tatoo's covering both arms and three different colors of hair.
Like I told Philboy, I didn't claim to write a better line, I was trying to show him how another writer could offer a different line (for better or worse). My reason to call Philboy out, was to have him ask his peers for our advise if he doubts a line, rather than write on his own and send his song off to NSAI for a critique. He only gets so many from them.
OD
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