Phillip (phil g.) Grigg said...
... so you may understand that, the first verse is done along with the chorus and bridge. (The second verse WAS done LOL) So, the lines in the second verse have to fit the meter and melody of the first verse, and therefore need to almost mirror the lyrics I posted in emphasis syllable's count. ...
See, I didn't know that a chorus followed a verse and the 2nd verse should mirror the 1st verse -- ya learn something new everyday. Ha, ha.
Actually I normally write a verse and chorus before the music (or maybe they happen at the time). ... and don't listen to OD, He thinks "my jalop with a floppy top" sounds dated.
Phillip (phil g.) Grigg said...
... therefore need to almost mirror the lyrics I posted in emphasis syllable's count. I may even drop the whole "love at first sight" thing. AND, I need physical visuals in there that relate to the story and scene I'm painting. ...
Hmmm, if you are changing the story based on syllable count, I think you are going at it backwards.
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