KevMo,
I love how you include one of your old songs into a discussion. I think you once said in the past "you shamefully" include a link to one of your songs. Not true but I love that you said that. Ha!!!
I'm not going to go into a full critique (because I know this is an older song); but I will point out a few things that I'm sure you have considered after all this time working with the MAB.
For one thing; by changing the lyrics so much in the three different choruses, they begin to sound more like a verse than a chorus.
Another thing, the last line in your choruses. I'm not going to pick on you for your hook at all. However, you know I have gotten on you about being too wordy which has led you to trying to rapid "spit fire" a line here and there. In this particular song, the last line would be much easier to sing if you dropped the "Yea" from the beginning of the line.
That is all I'll say about that.
OD