Jump started my Heart

gweneth
you have changed the rhyme on the verses . think if you kept them the same and lost some of the words ( some of the lines are hard to keep the melody going )  this will be a whole lot better not what i am writing but this whole lyric .

my every sense electrified
so much i haven' tried
then she jump...started my heeart

coming thru the door she lit up the place
the body and the looks no hair out of place
we talked and i told her i was waiting for the day
that a girl like her would finaly come my way
she laughed and said i like your style
and she too had was waiting for a while

just my opinion
john