Restart Button

(Chorus)
Take my life
And throw it all away
I'm done with this (@#$%)
I'm not OK
Push the restart button and walk away
Ya turn to black and then turn to gray

To many complications
To many implications
To many junky failures made this state of mind
My minds in unrest I guess I'm obsessed with
Self turned aggression
Self mind mutilation
So take my life
And turn it all to black
So I can start again
Ya I can start again
(Chorus)

Switch it up
And make it funny
I'll take neon green
And pink and fuzzy
Nah I'm do addicted hunny
I'll take black and blue
Let's go with the truth baby!

I need to bleed
I need to feed
My inner monster
That's killing me
Its leaching me
Its beating me
Someone please help me
Someone please help me!
(Chorus)

just letting ya know the do in the second verse is supposed to be to lol darn phone insta correct

 

 

Hi Charles,

Played around (quite a lot LOL) with your lyric - keep or sweep whatever you like my friendy :-0)

Chorus)
I'm done with this life
Wanna  throw it  away
I'm done with this grind
No, I'm not OK
Push the restart button and walk away 
I'll turn to black and then  to gray

Self made complications
such bad  implications
Substance abuse made me this way
My minds in turmoil every day
Thoughts of Inner aggression
And self mutilation
So take my life 
turn it all to black
So I can start again
Let me start again
(Chorus)

Switch it up
And make it funny
I'll take neon green
And pink and fuzzy
Nah I'm to addicted hunny
I'll take black and blue
Let's go with the truth baby!

I need to bleed
I need to feed
My inner monster
Thats leaching me
And its beating me
Someone please help me
Someone please help me!
(Chorus)

Like the fact that you started with the Chorus, Charles.  It really helps to make it flow better - I think if you had started with the first verse, you might have "lost" the reader (or the listener).  This is a good example of how the song's chorus helps to really support the verse lines.  And, I think that Gwyneth gave you some great food for thought as far as strengthening the song even more. 

thanks guys. I like the rewrite Gweneth sounds good I'm not sure if I should keep that third verse with pink and fuzzy but idk it's how I wrote it and it rhymes and goes with the song

my apologies second verse lol

Hi Charles,

 

I really like this lyric: it's like being on a emotional rollar coaster. I also like Gwyneth's changes to your lyric. Nice Work!!

 

Tony

GRB is onthe right track - but you started the train rolling!  I can hear this as an upbeat, sassy rocker!  Good luck with it!

Ag thanks guys Now just hope Charles like them too