THE SWORD OF THE LORD & GIDEON

I REALLY WOULD LIKE TO HAVE SOME ARTIST HELP PRODUCE THIS SONGI'M A MEMBER OF THE GIDEONS AND I KNOW THEY WOULD APPRECIATEIT AND POSSIBLE PROMOTE IT, I WOULD HOPE.V1.BECAUSE I GOT DISCOURAGEDFROM THE PRESSURES OF THE DAYI THINK BACK, TO SO LONG AGOWHEN I HEARD MY MOMMA SAYAS SHE TOOK THAT GIDEON BIBLEOFF THE SHELFOFFERED ME HER HEART AND HER HELPCHORUS:1[TALK] "SHE SAID SON", READ IT TO BE WISE,IT'LL OPEN UP YOUR EYES,IT'S WORDS ARE TRUESON IT'S THE BOOK FOR YOUV2.NOW WHEN I AM DISCOURAGEDI KNOW JUST WHERE TO FIND HELPI TAKE THAT GIDEON BIBLEOFTEN FROM THE SHELFGIVEN TO ME BY MAMMA WITH HER LOVEWORDS FROM MY FATHER UP ABOVECHORUS: 2AND I [PAST TENSE] READ IT TO BE WISEIT'S OPENED UP MY EYESIT'S WORDS ARE ALL TRUE, COULD IT BE THE BOOK FOR YOU[FINAL THOUGHT] THE SWORD OF THE LORDAND OF GIDEON, VICTORY WITH OH SO FEW MENMEN AND WOMEN TODAY, GIVE THAT SWORD AWAYTHE POWER OF GOD FOR EVERY ONETHE SWORD OF THE LORD AND OF GIDEONI have a few more verses that talk about the book of Judgeswhere the story comes from if you think it is neededgive me your thoughts on that, Charlie[note] chorus's could be longer, no problem

Charlie, you seem to have two completely different themes and stories going on here. The first theme or story involves the memory of your mother giving you a Bible to help you through some difficulty. The second theme or story relates to the mission of the Gideons (spreading the Word of God free of charge to the world) and connecting that mission to the Gideon of the Book of Judges (a military leader, who was victorious against the odds).If I were you, I would pick one theme or the other, or try to establish a solid connection between the two different themes/stories. If you want to connect all the themes together, I would organize your song as follows:VERSE 1: Talk about the Gideon of the Book of Judges and what he did.VERSE 2: Talk about the mission of the Gideons.CHORUS: Connect the stories in Verse 1 and Verse 2.VERSE 3: Connect your personal story to Verses 1 and 2.(Repeat Chorus) —Chris

thank you Chris, I didn't tie the thoughts together, the work of the Gideons was inspired by the storyof him, in the book of Judges [I just mentioned that] and I know they can be comfortably tied togetherby the way, the first two verses are because of the work of the Gideons.Thanks for your interest, Charlie

THAT WAS MY INTENTION, IT IS GOOD THAT YOU KINDA SAW THATBUT I DID NOT GET AROUND TO IT YET,AND WILL IN THE FUTURE THANKSCHRIS WHEN I DO I WILL RUN IT BY YOU, YOU ARE VERY OBSERVANT!!Chris I would like you to listen to a few of my songs,I'm thinking of possibly doinsome collabs with you but want you to see a little about what I am aboutmy site is www.soundclick.com/countrycousins I only have about 60 ,tunes on itbut many more in my mp3 folder. I would also like to hear some of your musicto thanks, Charlie

THIS IS IN THE PROCESS OF BEING RECORDED BY A GOOD FRIEND WHO HAS DONE A LOT OF MUSIC WITH ME, TOM RASELY THANK YOU ALL.