Very nice writing David, filled with many emotions! Another option for title could be: "Long Old Journey" or "You were there for me" ...or simply "There for me" since it is memorable and repeated in your chorus. However, it is your lyric, your title and of course your choice. Im very impressed with what you've written sir! Thanks for sharing and good luck with all your writings!Please know, just my immediate thoughts, and in no way an expression of dislike or negativity. I think its awesome! Just my attempt to add some help if desired. Respectfully; -Ron
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