Philboy, I apoligize for being a little harsh with you here.
We both know I am certainly no expert. I will also mention I am not familiar with a VVBV type song at all. I'm sure they do exist; but perhaps in the older market more than a current song market.
What I should have said was, I wish you had let me know that upfront before I commented and compared your lyrics to a more modern and common style of VCVCBC type song.
Sorry,
OD
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