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Dale Crockett
#4

Great lyrics here!  Love the rhymes you came up with. One of the things that "bore" me with songs is predictability with the rhymes.  I was far from bored with this one.  :)  One thing that came to me while reading the chorus, where you say "We're schooled in music with Country our selective".  Although the word "selective" works (and I knew exactly what you were meaning there), I'm just wondering if maybe the word "elective" migh be even stronger than "selective".  The only reason I say that is because when dealing with choosing a class or something, the word "elective" seems to be more widely used than "selective".    Just a thought.  "Keep it or sweep it", as they say.