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Welcome to the forum. I'm not new but I wouldn't call myself a seasoned vet either.I really like your song. It's touching and sweet. I thought it was nice how the story unfolded. The second verse was really nice. Soft rhymes. That's right up my alley. I use a lot of them too. I saw where one person in another forum elsewhere online used a rhyme scheme that included "maraschino" and "valentino". Great rhymes but I can barely spell maraschino, much less say it or sing it.lol Anyway, best wishes to you!