bad habits

Hi Charles

I'm liking what you've started with. Yes, it needs some tweaking and a chorus  to get it singable but that's what constructive crit

is all about. Suggestions and help from the songwriters here. So just playing around a bit with your start, viz;-

Please excuse my bad habits
I can't seem to control them
All they do is wreck me
All they do is they hex me 
I keep on  coming back 
lose control things go black

There ain't no heaven where I go
It's not hell  either so you know
Its just a place for my desire 
Its my escape, can you relate?