Good lyric!
Has emotional appeal. Who hasn't been, known or heard about someone in a relationship that has cheated.
I was able to conjure up some fresh images of this playing out based on what was said.
Suggestion on the chorus:
Ch)
I need a Sliver, just a sliver
Of a reason I should stay
Sliver, just a sliver
Of an answer here today
Don't think the last two lines are necessary in chorus.
In the 4th verse, I'd also work on the 2nd line there.
Perhaps: Cryin' with shaking hands to her mouth
The bridge explains everything!
Keep or sweep my suggestions & thoughts. : )
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