Verse1
Holding on to the misconception
That a broken heart will someday mend
So I dance around the truth
And tell myself it's all in my mind

Chorus
Cause nothing's ever truly broken
If there's a will then there is a way
With the right set of tools
I can make the pain go away(repeat)

Verse 2
Cowardly it may seem
To dodge the truth and live a lie
But I'll indulge my oppositions
And keep telling myself it's all in my mind

Chorus
Cause nothing's ever truly broken
If there's a will then there is a way
With the right set of tools
I can make the pain go away(repeat)

Bridge
If what I believe is true and real
Then there is nothing I can't do
So I'll pick up the pieces and start to heal

Chorus
Cause nothing's ever truly broken
If there's a will there is a way
With the right set of tools
I can make the pain go away
Gary Orphey
#1
For your consideration Aaron. You have a really nice idea here. You have only two verses, (that's okay) but if you look at them closely they say pretty much the same thing in a different way. Not much story progression. It might be nice to bring the other person into the song with the pronoun 'you'. It makes the song more personal to female listeners.

I like the dance metaphor very much.

(V)
I'm still dancing with a broken heart
That it seems will never mend
Out of step with loves music
I do it over and over again


(V)
It's only because I love you so
That I want to hold you near
I'll let my mind keep telling me
You're my lifetime partner my dear

(C)
Reality says the dance is over
But the music lingers on
Every day I remember
How we danced to the same song
As long as I have those memories
I'll dream a two step across the room
It helps to take the pain away
For a love that ended way to soon

Yours to keep or sweep. I wider range of thoughts in the story are still available. This is off the top of my pumpkin head.

Gary (just a guy trying to help)