I get your idea here, Larry - and I like it, but like Eddie and Debbie, I found myself trying to sort out a bit where the verse ends and the chorus begins. One line that stood out to me was "why do you care after all these years?" To me, that line didn't make much sense. I wondered about WHAT the person still cared about. I think a few lines that tell a short "backstory" would be helpful as well - to let the listener know who this person is and maybe where and how you connected with them again. Just my two cents.