Hi Bill,
LOL - I know The transition is a bit fast or abrupt in direction of the song hehehehe
Thanks for the sugg. The stalker trolled his way around FB and found a pretty girl. It happens all the time these days.
I'm changing a couple of things on the lyric which I think will make it stronger, losing the cat line and then that last radical
line LOL also going to put in another repeat line in the chorus which will make it flow better for music I think.
Thanks so much for you comments and feedback, really appreciate it.
Take care
Gwyneth
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