Hi Gwyneth!
Something that might enhance the effect of the story is this reveal: how did stalker get the singer's address?
ie transition from 'on-line' to 'a stare across the room at 'Starbucks'...how did he know??...then terror stikes deep!
I didn't know until the end that the singer is having a meet with Mr X, telling him the story and getting the contract....that was a little like falling off a cliff I didn't know was there. I don't know if thats good or bad. Its radical. The stalker has driven the singer to an extreme....the music would turn very stark, monotone, flatline....scary!! Maybe not country genre
Great topic in this lyric.
Bill
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