Hoping this will make it into the Rock genre and looking for a collaborator. Any suggs or help with this lyric to enhance will be appreciated.
Thanks in advance.
I see you attend Mass
Every single day
Always so generous
To the collection tray
But I saw you walk past
A poor beggar today
That was me incognito
You looked the other way
Got everyone fooled,
You do it so well
Such an artful act
A slick show and tell.
But you’re in for a shock.
No Hypocrites in Heaven……
They head straight for Hell…..
See you confess your sins
At least once a week
You receive absolution
Safety from the beast
But I saw you covet
Your neighbor’s wife today
Saw you stab him in the back
And then run away
Got everyone fooled,
You do it so well
Such an artful act
A slick show and tell.
But you’re in for a shock.
No Hypocrites in Heaven……
They head straight for Hell…..
You take Communion
Holy bread and wine
Your sins are all washed clean
Each and every time
But I saw you stealing
A priceless work of art today
Sold it on the black market
Said that “Crime does pay!”
Got everyone fooled,
You do it so well
Such an artful act
A slick show and tell.
But you’re in for a shock.
No Hypocrites in Heaven……
They head straight for Hell…..
Bridge
You don’t see me, but I’ve got eyes on you
It makes me sad to see the things you do
You running out of time
You’d better change your evil ways
My name is Gabriel……
You’ll see me at the end of days!