Hugo Zhor

 V1


 Sitting here in your small world


 You think you´ve got it all


 And live your life surrounded by


 Shadows on the wall


 


 V2


You live as they taught you


 As your ancestors did


 „Never look to the light!“


 Or you will be hit


 


 PreChorus:


 You have never dared to move


 To leave your sacred ground


 You are scared to know all truth


 To turn your head around


  


Chorus:


 From the cradle to the grave


 You are living in a cave


 Only shadows on the wall


 They cannot be really all!


 Hardly no one wants to know


 About a brighter way to go


  


V3


 Doubts are whirling in your head


 But they are weaker than


 Conviction of the others


 Who defeat you again


 


 V4 


 But there is a nagging doubt


 If light burns like fire


 Then fire just can warm either


 And might take you higher


  


PreChorus:


 You have never dared to move


 To leave your sacred ground


 You are scared to know all truth


 To turn your head around


  


Chorus:


 From the cradle to the grave


 You are living in a cave


 Only shadows on the wall


 They cannot be really all!


 Hardly no one wants to know


 About brighter way to go


 

Tony Curatolo
#1

Hi Hugo,


 


I agree with stewart's assesment of your lyric. I think it can be pretty awesome with a bit of re-writing. Personally, I hate doing re-writes but sometimes it's the only way to get things done correctly. Good luck with it.


 


Tony