Twisted Love

Jeez Tony, I thought some of my earlier stuff was dark!! But this.....

"burden me with your disease" ??? lol

Is this some thrash metal or a slow dark  "murder ballad"??

Short & terse lyrically, I am keen to hear how this is handled musically. :)

well done

Alan

Hi Allan,

I already have a song made form this lyric. It's being remixed and when I get permission from the artist then I'll post it so you can hear it. It sounds darker in print than it does listening to it. Thanks.

Tony

Tony,

I like it. lol  I could picture Lady Gaga singing it although that may not be what you intended.  That disease line is great. Again reminds me of Gaga.

Bad Romance - " I want your ugly, I want your disease" Lady Gaga

Interested to hear the music and the genre you intended. I'm guessing pop.

Well written as always

**One little request - You might want to increase the font size a bit. Makes it easier to see when reading.

Carl

Hi Carl,

I wrote the lyrtic with Gaga's song being my inspiration. That line concerning the word disease has been used in other songs besides Bad Romance. I'm glad you liked it. The songs is cool sounding and I'll post it as soon as I get permision. If I increase the font size the size of the lyric becomes way too long for this page. But thanks for that suggestion.

Tony

Carl

Tony,  if you  backspace  so thaat 2nd line follows  on imedaitely afterthe first line  and then hit shift/enter

Your formatting  should   owkr . Ive taken the  liberty  of  doing it  to v1 and v2   using that method

 hn

its a PITA  I know but the devs are working on it

Hi Stewie,

Thanks for the nice comments. I believe the rest of the lyric was as well thought out as I could make it to describe a twisted love. I wrote it based on a personal experience and wrote it as twisted as my realtionship was. But thanks for the suggestion.

Tony

Tony, This is a bad a** song. I could hear the guitars, drums, some sound effects and a huge croud with both fists in the air yelling and cheering at every word and beat.  I would'nt change one word. It "already' has a "life" of its own.  It jumps out and screems to be heard.

Well none, sir dude. <-- kinda reminds me of the sixties

Hi John,

You hear very well because those instruments dominate the song. As far as the crowds I'll daydream about that ever happening but it's an exciting thought--thanks for the super comments.  

Tony