Hi Gwyneth,
I have no music training and I believe that having such is necessary for the really good compositions, but for fun I started a little intro to the song.
It seems a little 'Tokien' in content...The Hobbit...so what came out was a touch celtic.
I changed the chorus on the fly to match the musical hook...and stumble a bit at ragged and torn...
After the intro I hear in my head a full rocking instrumental cascade of sound and a good strong lead sing....what do you think?
Hi Bill,
Thanks so much, glad you had a bit of fun with it. I can definately hear the "Celtic Touch" , no prob with the tweaking it
works in this instance for the music. But I envisage this as a Hard Rock number hehehe, hope there's a rocker out
there that might want to have a stab at it.
Thanks Bill, that was fun and to answer your question yes - "full rocking instrumental cascade of sound and a good strong lead sing"
I like it 