Hi Gwyneth,
I have no music training and I believe that having such is necessary for the really good compositions, but for fun I started a little intro to the song.
It seems a little 'Tokien' in content...The Hobbit...so what came out was a touch celtic.
I changed the chorus on the fly to match the musical hook...and stumble a bit at ragged and torn...
After the intro I hear in my head a full rocking instrumental cascade of sound and a good strong lead sing....what do you think?
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