Carl B

Oooh  The last two lines including the outro are rather ominous in my opinion.


Gary, I enjoy reading poems and lyrics like this with the lady of the lake.


Nice write with some great imagery.

Gary Orphey
#1

Thanks Carl, I'm glad you liked the piece. Yes, I would say ominous is a good word. She rose as a spectre  out of the devils water I could see her as nothing else.

Gwyneth Rose Bradley
#2

Wow Gario,


I love songs that relate to myth and conjecture. You've weaved an intricate web of intrigue


and facination with a stunning tale. Love it! Thanks for sharing Happy