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Chris Brownell
#4
Thanks to your suggestions! They are very interesting.
Here’s the version (NKJV) of Psalm 148 that I based my lyrics on:
https://www.biblegateway.com/passage/?search=Psalm+148&version=NKJV
This version says “stars of light” instead of “stars at night”. Besides, “at night” suggests a time limitation I want to avoid.
I said “God” in the third line because, otherwise, the listener wouldn’t necessarily know who “He” is until the end of Verse 2.
All three verses have the same amount of syllables and overall structure:
4-4
12
4-4
4