Music Completed ... almost finished, ....Titled : "All This"

All This (c) 2108 R. Madore You were holding me, Like I never felt before Like a song that never leaves your mind It never lets go 'Cos maybe life Has taken me to you To feel what love is In our kiss, How I miss... All of this All this, all this All of this All this, this. Somewhere in the darkness Is my heart Searchin for the memories in her life By far, is all I have... This All this, all this All of this All this, all this I miss you I miss you I, I, I, Miss you If you see me runnin, runnin, runnin, around You don't know how I feel I'm in this pain Don't let it fool you in your eyes It's just the same And it will never, ever change This! Is not me, it's not me This! (go on) It's not me, (go on) it's not me (go on) no... No no no This is, not me.

(-40...These lyrics read well, repeated words and phrases traditionally have the strongest hook element, this song looks good)

Thank you Mike! I have just uploaded song in open Mic if you'd like to hear finished work. Thanks again sir!

do you have a melody for this Ron? just curious, wonderin about how it meters. I see you do have a melody gonna check it out, Charlie

Yes...song posted earlier. Should be on my page. Thx!