Kissed by the Wind

I will post the finished song up as soon as it's finished. This will be a co-write with Jonathan Wood who is working on the melody. Any thoughts on the lyric will be much appreciated. I have a good idea of how I want this to go..........an 80's pop/rock kinda route. ????

 

KISSED BY THE WIND

Adrift just for a moment, my mind was all at sea

All I ever wanted, was for you to come and save me

 I’m trapped here in a cage,

oh to reach out far & wide

Deliver me, from this rage,

I will surely die

Hear my spirit cry, if i could only fly

 

Kissed by the wind

be free from discipline

 

Kissed by the wind

Kissed by the wind

Kissed by the wind

 Is this where the story ends

Kissed by the wind

 

Through sugar coated candy, I taste this bitter pill

Lived my life on the edge, I am sure I’ve had my fill

To walk this road so many times,

and never break my stride

I passed so many, warning signs

They never caught my eye

Reach out for the sky, spread my wings & fly

 

Kissed by the wind

be free from discipline

 

Kissed by the wind

Kissed by the wind

Kissed by the wind

Kissed by the wind

Is this where the story ends

Kissed by the wind

 

All I ever wished for, the day that I was found

Was for you to pick me up, lift me from the ground       

To free me from this inner pain                       

and never leave my side      

For you to take me back again

and never question why

never say goodbye, fail to even try

 

Kissed by the wind

Is this where the story ends

 

Kissed by the wind

Kissed by the wind

Kissed by the wind

Kissed by the wind

Is this where the story ends

Kissed by the wind

 

Kissed by the wind

Love this. The emotional imagery reaches out and touches. You really have me feeling the pain. Bravo well written
Cheers
G

I'm liking this! Can't wait to hear the finished product!

Hi Alan,

Would be great if you reviewed 2 other lyrics. Keep the ball rolling and all that jazz

Hi Gwyneth, no problem, I will get some reviews done soon :)  still trying to get my head round this new version of the site. Must admit I found the old site much easier hahaha.

I think I somehow managed to delete all my songs yesterday..........thought I was just deleting an album     aaaaagh!

Here's Kissed By the Wind  for you Skipp......it's short & sweet

https://soundcloud.com/barbwiretourniquet/kissed-by-the-wind

 

Alan 

couldn't get a handle on the music until i listened it works   good write and recording

 

john

Hi Alan,

This is lovely, enjoyed it thanks for sharing. Hope you're going to upload your other songs,

don't let them disappear.

Not at all what I was expecting John! When reading through the lyrics, the had a kind of melancholy feel to them. But that song is anything but melancholy! Great job on that! Very kewl song!

Lots of ominous images: in a cage, from this rage, surely die, on the edge, warning signs.  Things aren't looking good!

Hi Jim, you are right..............I do need to cheer up a bit    i really struggle to write a happy song

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=N8cobhUsJtE